for As if9/8/2006 c1 
19lengg
Nice job on this poem. The repetition of as if works really well in this poem and this short poem protrays a very wonderful feeling. Nice job =)
19lenggNice job on this poem. The repetition of as if works really well in this poem and this short poem protrays a very wonderful feeling. Nice job =)
6/4/2006 c1 6Jodirium
Short. Simple. Sweet.Sounds a lot like a branch-off from the old saying, "Dance, as if no one is watching".
I liked it very much.
- Signed as J.
PS. The third, long, chapter of 'No one call's me smooth' has been up for a while now... I think I may just have updated the story to quickly for anyone to notice. Heh. Thanx for reviewing for stuff too!
6JodiriumShort. Simple. Sweet.Sounds a lot like a branch-off from the old saying, "Dance, as if no one is watching".
I liked it very much.
- Signed as J.
PS. The third, long, chapter of 'No one call's me smooth' has been up for a while now... I think I may just have updated the story to quickly for anyone to notice. Heh. Thanx for reviewing for stuff too!