for Jaded6/4/2006 c1 
23Erimenthy
This was so simple but yet so deep...I was surprised that this was so good, it goes to show not everything can be expected! =)
23ErimenthyThis was so simple but yet so deep...I was surprised that this was so good, it goes to show not everything can be expected! =)
5/14/2006 c1 14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style
...And that's the truth of reality. ^^...Great poem and message. In the middle of the poem, I thought you were going a bit off topic. Though it came back strong at the end. (Good last two lines) Good job on this, bravo^^.
14O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.style...And that's the truth of reality. ^^...Great poem and message. In the middle of the poem, I thought you were going a bit off topic. Though it came back strong at the end. (Good last two lines) Good job on this, bravo^^.