
5/15/2006 c1
28Kellza
My favorite part? "artfully wrapped."
To me "artful" is another way of saying "deceitful".
This is gorgeous, Sarah, and you really need to drink more.

My favorite part? "artfully wrapped."
To me "artful" is another way of saying "deceitful".
This is gorgeous, Sarah, and you really need to drink more.
5/14/2006 c1
92burning in effigy
Lovely poem. Ending was my favorite; it kind of makes you think, and thinking is always a good thing (most of the time)Also like how it's kind of short, and there are no extra words or lines.Great job!

Lovely poem. Ending was my favorite; it kind of makes you think, and thinking is always a good thing (most of the time)Also like how it's kind of short, and there are no extra words or lines.Great job!