for Mixture Makes it Better5/23/2006 c3 Hitori-Hoshi
ffpress is being stupid so this is going to show up as annon. TT.TT Anywhoo, I hope that Seth does get a few spanks! And I kinda like Cyril. I understand about his whole waning to explore the world too quickly ^^ Please update as soon as you get the chance!
ffpress is being stupid so this is going to show up as annon. TT.TT Anywhoo, I hope that Seth does get a few spanks! And I kinda like Cyril. I understand about his whole waning to explore the world too quickly ^^ Please update as soon as you get the chance!
5/23/2006 c3 bambi4real
Oh gosh! Thank goodness for lemons! I knew they were good for lemonade but who knew they made the work day go by so fast! I was reading this in the office and trying to keep the smirk off my face. The whole Seth/Cyril seduction dance was so cliche, by that I mean Seth was being an obvious lecherous pervert and Cyril was being the coy slutty boy that he is. I loved it. My favorite line had to be: He walked closer, “I can see your lust Seth.” He pushed his body against mine, “Why don’t we full fill each others fantasies. No strings attached.”
Oh gosh! Thank goodness for lemons! I knew they were good for lemonade but who knew they made the work day go by so fast! I was reading this in the office and trying to keep the smirk off my face. The whole Seth/Cyril seduction dance was so cliche, by that I mean Seth was being an obvious lecherous pervert and Cyril was being the coy slutty boy that he is. I loved it. My favorite line had to be: He walked closer, “I can see your lust Seth.” He pushed his body against mine, “Why don’t we full fill each others fantasies. No strings attached.”
5/23/2006 c3 
28Hate In The Form Of Passion
YES! He does need LOTS of spanks! I was just thinking that! ;-;! You mind-reader you! Cyril is pretty hot, sexy, and slutty though. I luff him!
28Hate In The Form Of PassionYES! He does need LOTS of spanks! I was just thinking that! ;-;! You mind-reader you! Cyril is pretty hot, sexy, and slutty though. I luff him!
5/22/2006 c3 princess max
*fans self*
hot
*fans self*
hot
5/22/2006 c2 7Maris. S
*lol* I like this story so much! I can't wait until you write another chapter!
7Maris. S*lol* I like this story so much! I can't wait until you write another chapter!
5/20/2006 c2 28Hate In The Form Of Passion
We~~! LUFF IT! MORE! MORE! MORE! Aww. Seth didn't stay with Kev Kev. I feel so bad for Kev. Update soon~!
28Hate In The Form Of PassionWe~~! LUFF IT! MORE! MORE! MORE! Aww. Seth didn't stay with Kev Kev. I feel so bad for Kev. Update soon~!
5/20/2006 c1 Hate In The Form Of Passion
FINALLY! THE SEQUEL! GAWD! IT WAS HOT! I missed this story so much! Luff you and it!
FINALLY! THE SEQUEL! GAWD! IT WAS HOT! I missed this story so much! Luff you and it!
5/18/2006 c2 princess max
Are we going to see a crossover? If so, cool!
Heh, I love Elijah. It's not hard to follow the story at all, seeing as you tell us which POV it is at the beginning.
Are we going to see a crossover? If so, cool!
Heh, I love Elijah. It's not hard to follow the story at all, seeing as you tell us which POV it is at the beginning.
5/18/2006 c2 bambi4real
I liked it and it wasnt boring. I liked the bit about seth scoping out cyril. they deserve each other being players and all. I didnt get that it was the guys from the other story but i had a ningling suspicion. I was positive when you added cyril that it was the same crew. Way cool.
I liked it and it wasnt boring. I liked the bit about seth scoping out cyril. they deserve each other being players and all. I didnt get that it was the guys from the other story but i had a ningling suspicion. I was positive when you added cyril that it was the same crew. Way cool.
5/15/2006 c1 42Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doom
This was so great... I'm going to go get a cold drink...
Update soon!
42Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of DoomThis was so great... I'm going to go get a cold drink...
Update soon!
5/15/2006 c1 bambi4real
it's alright if you call me bambi I know it gets too long ot write someitmes. Don't apologize for starting this one I was uber excited when I realized it was seth's story. it was just as good as i thought it was going to be. Great job!I always though Seth would be the more dominant one in the relationship. I like narratives and I like POVs so I think a combo of the two would n't be bad. I would just caution that you use them sparingly because it can sometimes get confusing. Now you have to make sure that Seth is a total freak that Kevin brings to heel. :) Oh also there was spelling error with site when you meant sight.
it's alright if you call me bambi I know it gets too long ot write someitmes. Don't apologize for starting this one I was uber excited when I realized it was seth's story. it was just as good as i thought it was going to be. Great job!I always though Seth would be the more dominant one in the relationship. I like narratives and I like POVs so I think a combo of the two would n't be bad. I would just caution that you use them sparingly because it can sometimes get confusing. Now you have to make sure that Seth is a total freak that Kevin brings to heel. :) Oh also there was spelling error with site when you meant sight.
5/14/2006 c1 StoryJunkie
whew, slash. Sorry I accidentally clicked this. Didn't mean to, but boy, it was pretty rivetting, even though I'm not into this sort of thing. Good going.
whew, slash. Sorry I accidentally clicked this. Didn't mean to, but boy, it was pretty rivetting, even though I'm not into this sort of thing. Good going.