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5/23/2006 c3 Hitori-Hoshi
ffpress is being stupid so this is going to show up as annon. TT.TT Anywhoo, I hope that Seth does get a few spanks! And I kinda like Cyril. I understand about his whole waning to explore the world too quickly ^^ Please update as soon as you get the chance!
5/23/2006 c3 bambi4real
Oh gosh! Thank goodness for lemons! I knew they were good for lemonade but who knew they made the work day go by so fast! I was reading this in the office and trying to keep the smirk off my face. The whole Seth/Cyril seduction dance was so cliche, by that I mean Seth was being an obvious lecherous pervert and Cyril was being the coy slutty boy that he is. I loved it. My favorite line had to be: He walked closer, “I can see your lust Seth.” He pushed his body against mine, “Why don’t we full fill each others fantasies. No strings attached.”
5/23/2006 c3 28Hate In The Form Of Passion
YES! He does need LOTS of spanks! I was just thinking that! ;-;! You mind-reader you! Cyril is pretty hot, sexy, and slutty though. I luff him!
5/22/2006 c3 princess max
*fans self*

5/22/2006 c2 7Maris. S
*lol* I like this story so much! I can't wait until you write another chapter!
5/20/2006 c2 28Hate In The Form Of Passion
We~~! LUFF IT! MORE! MORE! MORE! Aww. Seth didn't stay with Kev Kev. I feel so bad for Kev. Update soon~!
5/20/2006 c1 Hate In The Form Of Passion
FINALLY! THE SEQUEL! GAWD! IT WAS HOT! I missed this story so much! Luff you and it!
5/18/2006 c2 princess max
Are we going to see a crossover? If so, cool!

Heh, I love Elijah. It's not hard to follow the story at all, seeing as you tell us which POV it is at the beginning.
5/18/2006 c2 bambi4real
I liked it and it wasnt boring. I liked the bit about seth scoping out cyril. they deserve each other being players and all. I didnt get that it was the guys from the other story but i had a ningling suspicion. I was positive when you added cyril that it was the same crew. Way cool.
5/15/2006 c1 42Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doom
This was so great... I'm going to go get a cold drink...

Update soon!
5/15/2006 c1 bambi4real
it's alright if you call me bambi I know it gets too long ot write someitmes. Don't apologize for starting this one I was uber excited when I realized it was seth's story. it was just as good as i thought it was going to be. Great job!I always though Seth would be the more dominant one in the relationship. I like narratives and I like POVs so I think a combo of the two would n't be bad. I would just caution that you use them sparingly because it can sometimes get confusing. Now you have to make sure that Seth is a total freak that Kevin brings to heel. :) Oh also there was spelling error with site when you meant sight.
5/14/2006 c1 StoryJunkie
whew, slash. Sorry I accidentally clicked this. Didn't mean to, but boy, it was pretty rivetting, even though I'm not into this sort of thing. Good going.
5/14/2006 c1 21princess max
You did lemon! Yumy!
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