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14FreakierThanThou
Aww, so sweet. So his imaginings of the woman who made the wreath were real? Nice twist.
A few things I'd like to mention: it's a little tough to focus on when your first few paragraphs are so long, you might consider shortening them. But that might be just because I'm not wearing my glasses. Also, what did you mean by "Imagine fantabulous writings ehre"?
I loved the end, and the descriptive style was simply beautiful. Great story, nice imagry.
Keep writing,
-Freaky
14FreakierThanThouAww, so sweet. So his imaginings of the woman who made the wreath were real? Nice twist.
A few things I'd like to mention: it's a little tough to focus on when your first few paragraphs are so long, you might consider shortening them. But that might be just because I'm not wearing my glasses. Also, what did you mean by "Imagine fantabulous writings ehre"?
I loved the end, and the descriptive style was simply beautiful. Great story, nice imagry.
Keep writing,
-Freaky