for Girl At Heart9/7/2019 c20 Guest
How the fuck does this have so many reviews? Like, from your author notes you seem like an okay person but your story is undeserving of all this popularity imo.
The plot was basic, there was no real character development and the protagonist was the most unrealistic I’ve ever read and to top it all off you’d insert the cringiest Author notes or remarks in brackets within the story! How unprofessional!
I sincerely hope your writing has become better
How the fuck does this have so many reviews? Like, from your author notes you seem like an okay person but your story is undeserving of all this popularity imo.
The plot was basic, there was no real character development and the protagonist was the most unrealistic I’ve ever read and to top it all off you’d insert the cringiest Author notes or remarks in brackets within the story! How unprofessional!
I sincerely hope your writing has become better
4/21/2018 c20 Guest
OMG! This was a really cute story. I absolutely loved it! It was funny, romantic, and just incredibly GREAT! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
OMG! This was a really cute story. I absolutely loved it! It was funny, romantic, and just incredibly GREAT! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
3/26/2017 c19 Guest
why r all da female names wierd and the male names normal
why r all da female names wierd and the male names normal
3/26/2017 c20 Caspar Lee
cliché ending lol
cliché ending lol
3/26/2017 c5 LOVE THISS BOOK
These chapter names are just plain savage
These chapter names are just plain savage
11/30/2015 c20 Guest
This is seriously the best book I have ever read! I really hope you're still online to read this.
This is seriously the best book I have ever read! I really hope you're still online to read this.
11/18/2015 c20 WTF
It was pretty good u should make a second!?$$$&& !
It was pretty good u should make a second!?$$$&& !
11/11/2015 c12 Kacey
This is turning different... The characters aren't exactly very innocent anymore.
This is turning different... The characters aren't exactly very innocent anymore.
11/11/2015 c5 Puffisha
"treat em mean, keep em keen" xDD IDK WHY THAT'S SOOO FUNNY m8!
"treat em mean, keep em keen" xDD IDK WHY THAT'S SOOO FUNNY m8!
11/11/2015 c1 Kacey
I'm in love with this and so into it already. I'll most likely read every post you put up. Thank you for your work and effort, I finally found something to kill time with xoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxxo 3
I'm in love with this and so into it already. I'll most likely read every post you put up. Thank you for your work and effort, I finally found something to kill time with xoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxxo 3
7/7/2015 c15 Misa
Forgot to give u a review and cookie for the story since i'm to caught up reading it xD
Forgot to give u a review and cookie for the story since i'm to caught up reading it xD
7/7/2015 c1 Misa
It's interesting! It mase me crave for more
It's interesting! It mase me crave for more
5/19/2015 c20 annayh44
The only thing that disappoint me is she no more agent. . cry cry .but others all were so so happy happy ! love this story. .confirm it as one of Best story i ever read
The only thing that disappoint me is she no more agent. . cry cry .but others all were so so happy happy ! love this story. .confirm it as one of Best story i ever read
8/31/2014 c2 Julietish
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: There’s been an attempt on the life of the First Son and Loralai, a quirky undercover agent is assigned to be his bodyguard and investigate the case. The only catch? He attends an all boys boarding school.
The cliché of pretending to be the other gender is almost always one filled with hilarious misunderstandings and near misses and Girl at Heart certainly does not disappoint, with more humour than you can shake a stick at.
Loralai does not seem like she would be a good agent – she’s excitable and fun – but she can also take responsibility when the events call for it. Her relationship with James starts out tentatively as he thinks her a little strange (Loralai does introduce herself by talking about Area 51) but the two become friends.
The grammar and pacing of this story certainly aren’t perfect, especially at the start, but they don’t distract from the story too much. Instead, Promiscuous Geek’s style rather suits Loralai’s personality, since she is the main narrator, and her tendency to go off on tangents.
Overall Girl at Heart does what a comedic story is supposed to – it makes you laugh, a lot – and the ending will almost certainly put a cheesy grin on your face for the rest of the day.
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: There’s been an attempt on the life of the First Son and Loralai, a quirky undercover agent is assigned to be his bodyguard and investigate the case. The only catch? He attends an all boys boarding school.
The cliché of pretending to be the other gender is almost always one filled with hilarious misunderstandings and near misses and Girl at Heart certainly does not disappoint, with more humour than you can shake a stick at.
Loralai does not seem like she would be a good agent – she’s excitable and fun – but she can also take responsibility when the events call for it. Her relationship with James starts out tentatively as he thinks her a little strange (Loralai does introduce herself by talking about Area 51) but the two become friends.
The grammar and pacing of this story certainly aren’t perfect, especially at the start, but they don’t distract from the story too much. Instead, Promiscuous Geek’s style rather suits Loralai’s personality, since she is the main narrator, and her tendency to go off on tangents.
Overall Girl at Heart does what a comedic story is supposed to – it makes you laugh, a lot – and the ending will almost certainly put a cheesy grin on your face for the rest of the day.
3/25/2014 c1 Guest
Cute story !
Cute story !