
9/2/2006 c1
31xForeverAndAlwaysx
This is so good because its so raw and real. and the repitition really works here, it conveys the feeling of struggling for a long time in a vicious cycle.

This is so good because its so raw and real. and the repitition really works here, it conveys the feeling of struggling for a long time in a vicious cycle.
7/17/2006 c1
172DefineBeauty
o, i like it! makes you wonder what happened, and also i bet alot of people can relate, including myself...great job!
p.s. thanks so much for the wicked awesome reviews! its because of my readers and reviewers that i continue to write, thats so much!

o, i like it! makes you wonder what happened, and also i bet alot of people can relate, including myself...great job!
p.s. thanks so much for the wicked awesome reviews! its because of my readers and reviewers that i continue to write, thats so much!
5/15/2006 c1
19Rhea Valente
Wow. Powerful, powerful stuff.
I understand that in many ways, really.
Amazing writing. Seriously... imagery.. and... *shivers*
~L (9.59 in the pm)

Wow. Powerful, powerful stuff.
I understand that in many ways, really.
Amazing writing. Seriously... imagery.. and... *shivers*
~L (9.59 in the pm)