for Under the Apple Blossoms4/12/2007 c1 
31Suicidal Romance
you are such an awesome writer! i love you! i could read your works forever and never ever get tired of reading any one bit over again! that's how great you are! yea...i have issues...just take a compliment and you can go to my fictionpress and cal me psycho if that pleases you...
31Suicidal Romanceyou are such an awesome writer! i love you! i could read your works forever and never ever get tired of reading any one bit over again! that's how great you are! yea...i have issues...just take a compliment and you can go to my fictionpress and cal me psycho if that pleases you...
9/3/2006 c1 30LittleTaintedOne
*tear* that was beautiful. The ending was a surprise, but it too is part of the beauty that is this poem. Great work.
30LittleTaintedOne*tear* that was beautiful. The ending was a surprise, but it too is part of the beauty that is this poem. Great work.
8/14/2006 c1 70Maisha Mafuriko
...so many Springtimes with promise of Life Anew...
Beautifully conveyed...the sweet anticipation of once again being with "love" as it were...
70Maisha Mafuriko...so many Springtimes with promise of Life Anew...
Beautifully conveyed...the sweet anticipation of once again being with "love" as it were...
7/25/2006 c1 Ladiebug
Wow. I loved it. The first few stanza's were a bit forced but the rest was great! I love how you find out at the end that he's really dead, that was really well done.
Wow. I loved it. The first few stanza's were a bit forced but the rest was great! I love how you find out at the end that he's really dead, that was really well done.
7/13/2006 c1 18Plinky
Wow. That's really lovely.
IT's even more beautiful because of the ending - really drives it home.
Gorgeous poem. Keep writing!
18PlinkyWow. That's really lovely.
IT's even more beautiful because of the ending - really drives it home.
Gorgeous poem. Keep writing!
7/1/2006 c1 24xLilyx
oh that really is sad, but sweet in the fact that although she may of moved on she visits the grave...oh im getting emotional! lol
24xLilyxoh that really is sad, but sweet in the fact that although she may of moved on she visits the grave...oh im getting emotional! lol
6/17/2006 c1 9Aluminum Tinkerbell
Aww...I thought it was sweet at first, and then near the middle I realized he was probably dead, because I'm morbid like that.
Anyway, amazing job!
9Aluminum TinkerbellAww...I thought it was sweet at first, and then near the middle I realized he was probably dead, because I'm morbid like that.
Anyway, amazing job!
5/19/2006 c1 free-to-dream15
OMG wow! This was probably your best one yet! no joke! (sorry, bit hyper) keep on writing!
OMG wow! This was probably your best one yet! no joke! (sorry, bit hyper) keep on writing!
5/18/2006 c1 5theinvisiblewarrior
Oh my gosh! ::wipes away tear:: that was beautiful! Nice little twist at the end, I must say. I thank my best friend, futureworlddictator for recommending you to me.
5theinvisiblewarriorOh my gosh! ::wipes away tear:: that was beautiful! Nice little twist at the end, I must say. I thank my best friend, futureworlddictator for recommending you to me.
5/16/2006 c1 234angelcloudsh
that was a truly beautiful poem, a little rough with the ryhthm because you switched from 4 line, 3 line, and 2 line stanzas, but still, it is amazing, almost made me cry.~Angelclouds
234angelcloudshthat was a truly beautiful poem, a little rough with the ryhthm because you switched from 4 line, 3 line, and 2 line stanzas, but still, it is amazing, almost made me cry.~Angelclouds
5/15/2006 c1 103heartbroken922
wow that ending was so unexpected. it was so sad! In the begining i thought it was cute and sweet and when i read the ending i was like 'what?' that was sad. but it was beautifully written. great job i loved it so much. the story is in my favorites.
103heartbroken922wow that ending was so unexpected. it was so sad! In the begining i thought it was cute and sweet and when i read the ending i was like 'what?' that was sad. but it was beautifully written. great job i loved it so much. the story is in my favorites.