
5/18/2006 c1
63lackluster
this is gorgeous. i would think the heavy formating would distract from the poem, but you have such lovely diction and flow that it only adds to it.

this is gorgeous. i would think the heavy formating would distract from the poem, but you have such lovely diction and flow that it only adds to it.
5/17/2006 c1
11les petits bateaux
oh you are amazing. i enjoyed the way you associated everything with music, it's somewhat refreshing to read something like this and the way you enunciate the words. favourite goes to the second paragraph, definitely.
-trinity.

oh you are amazing. i enjoyed the way you associated everything with music, it's somewhat refreshing to read something like this and the way you enunciate the words. favourite goes to the second paragraph, definitely.
-trinity.