5/17/2006 c1 19Rhea Valente
WOW!

That was SO pretty!

Really!

WOW!

I'm SO pleased with myself, i could tell it was written through the eyes of a lil kid straight away! heehee! *looks pleased with self*

And i LOVE the formatting - its not ott, its almost subtle.. yeh.

AWESOME.

Really pretty. Filled me with a .. a .. "lightness." Yup.

Yeh - how the baby always crushed them.. then learnt (learned?) to let them fly away. Really cool.

Fav part? Ooh, hard.. *thinks*.. uhmm.. probs.. no... jeez. Aw man, its too hard to pick a fav part.. *scratches head* .. i LOVE it all.. but.. uhmm.. the last stanza, probably. Yeh:

"You have to teach meAgain and againBut I never want to hurt yourButterfliesSo help meLearn toLet them. F l y ."

Probably because it wraps it up really nicely.

This.. i think.. is one of .. if not the .. fav poem u've written. Yeh. Goin straight on fav list. ^_^

You captured the... innocence? .. perfectly. Awesome.