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8/20/2006 c1 270dustytiger
you are an extremly talented writer, this is an amazing peice of poetry you have written here, truely, great job on this thank you for the review and thank you for sharing
7/4/2006 c1 8bemused scribbler
m...you describe the torture and longing the person is feeling really well. it sorta made me feel like i was the person, but maybe thats because many people have crushes and infatuations. anyways, im gonna stop rambling now. nice work, i liked it.
6/30/2006 c1 11Veronica Keeler
i love the way this is in an old english style and very mysterious
6/10/2006 c1 3Leo Eigenmann
Wow, nice expression of feelings in this poem! It certainly is a must for aspiring poets. Putting feelings into words is really a great thing to get relieved from the hurly burly of the real life.I like the usage and choices of words. You seem to be a promising writer. Keep it up. Try to check out my works whenever you've got the time.
6/6/2006 c1 3Rabid Violinist
Beautiful piece. great emotion, well crafted language. great work!
6/5/2006 c1 1J'Adore Les Phoques
The epitome of love.. ah. Funky times.
5/22/2006 c1 1Mosaic Stains
I like this poem, it has a solemnly sad touch to it that makes the poem nice in its silent symbolic meaning.
5/20/2006 c1 criti-sized
Oh, this poem was really nice, I liked the symbolism in the poem and the deep meaning underneath it.

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