
7/26/2006 c1
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05
this is so cute! i can so relate to this with my bf! great work!
~SarahJane

this is so cute! i can so relate to this with my bf! great work!
~SarahJane
5/24/2006 c1 Blank1379
Once again, I love how this can apply to anyone, not just a boyfriend or a girlfriend. I have a couple friends like this, and though the particular one coming to mind right now is, in fact, a guy, the relationship isn't romantic. So I really like the fact that this can apply to people who are simply friends.Very nice, mellon nin-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
Once again, I love how this can apply to anyone, not just a boyfriend or a girlfriend. I have a couple friends like this, and though the particular one coming to mind right now is, in fact, a guy, the relationship isn't romantic. So I really like the fact that this can apply to people who are simply friends.Very nice, mellon nin-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
5/20/2006 c1
27HgBookworm
Excellent poem. I can certainly realte to the feeling of loving someone more than everything else in nature that you've always known and loved. It's such a wonderful feeling and your poem portrays it beautifully. Good luck with your future writing. -HgBookworm

Excellent poem. I can certainly realte to the feeling of loving someone more than everything else in nature that you've always known and loved. It's such a wonderful feeling and your poem portrays it beautifully. Good luck with your future writing. -HgBookworm
5/20/2006 c1 xInSaNexBlOodyxPrInCeSs
Yay! You know I love it. ^^ The last stanza is really, really good. And all of it's true, too~which is why it's good. Now I must go, because I have to figure out how the Revolutionary War is just a series of extremely lucky coincidences. (BLEH FOR SEMINAR!)
luv, ~inhye
Yay! You know I love it. ^^ The last stanza is really, really good. And all of it's true, too~which is why it's good. Now I must go, because I have to figure out how the Revolutionary War is just a series of extremely lucky coincidences. (BLEH FOR SEMINAR!)
luv, ~inhye
5/20/2006 c1
230lovelikeamixtape
aw, this is so cute. you did a really nice job with this- it's not as cliche as i think most poems of this nature would be because the things you say are actually clever. good work :)

aw, this is so cute. you did a really nice job with this- it's not as cliche as i think most poems of this nature would be because the things you say are actually clever. good work :)