for Reflections5/31/2006 c1 
133Dying Rose
Wow. I agree, this is one of your better poems. There are a couple trippy lines but the rest of the poem swallows them in the perfection achieved in the truth and complexity involved in your "reflections." The poem is written in a very emotional, raw way and feels almost brutal in the honesty in each line. Very very very good. Keep writing things like this!
133Dying RoseWow. I agree, this is one of your better poems. There are a couple trippy lines but the rest of the poem swallows them in the perfection achieved in the truth and complexity involved in your "reflections." The poem is written in a very emotional, raw way and feels almost brutal in the honesty in each line. Very very very good. Keep writing things like this!
5/20/2006 c1 17shynesss
I agree fully with LonelyShandow. This was one of the best poems I've read and it reminds be so much of me and who I've become. *puts in favorites*
17shynesssI agree fully with LonelyShandow. This was one of the best poems I've read and it reminds be so much of me and who I've become. *puts in favorites*
5/20/2006 c1 9BenevolentShadow
This is, honestly, one of the best things I read on this site. But...
I hate this piece, wait don't stop reading this review because I seem mean. It's not because its poorly written or anything like that but it reminds me so much about how I feel about I myself. Any way... Excellent work...
L. Shandow
9BenevolentShadowThis is, honestly, one of the best things I read on this site. But...
I hate this piece, wait don't stop reading this review because I seem mean. It's not because its poorly written or anything like that but it reminds me so much about how I feel about I myself. Any way... Excellent work...
L. Shandow