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5/24/2006 c1 24Penguins and Popsicles
I raise my voice! I WANT TO BREAK FREE! If only I could... Damn... This poem is beautiful... Just amazing... Good job... You deserve cream puffs...
5/20/2006 c1 46asteria24
Spread the message.Very good poem, especially the rhymes, although you might have some problems with the rhythm in the fourth line, and the lines in the third stanza seem way too long.

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