for Here Again11/29/2006 c1 
17life like whoa
I liked the concept of it, yet the rhyming (spelling?) seemed slightly stretched and forced. There were a couple lines that hit me pretty hard though:
"This time, I realize, I need a helping hand.
But it can't be yours. You'll never understand!"
That was a beautiful line.
Keep writing! *thumbs up!*
17life like whoaI liked the concept of it, yet the rhyming (spelling?) seemed slightly stretched and forced. There were a couple lines that hit me pretty hard though:
"This time, I realize, I need a helping hand.
But it can't be yours. You'll never understand!"
That was a beautiful line.
Keep writing! *thumbs up!*
5/24/2006 c1 24Penguins and Popsicles
Beutiful. I can relate. I hate people stepping on me like that. I know the feeling of being used by someone you love and trust. Don't worry, be strong and everything will be fine! Good luck! *huggles and cream puffs*
24Penguins and PopsiclesBeutiful. I can relate. I hate people stepping on me like that. I know the feeling of being used by someone you love and trust. Don't worry, be strong and everything will be fine! Good luck! *huggles and cream puffs*