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11/29/2006 c1 17life like whoa
I liked the concept of it, yet the rhyming (spelling?) seemed slightly stretched and forced. There were a couple lines that hit me pretty hard though:

"This time, I realize, I need a helping hand.

But it can't be yours. You'll never understand!"

That was a beautiful line.

Keep writing! *thumbs up!*
5/24/2006 c1 24Penguins and Popsicles
Beutiful. I can relate. I hate people stepping on me like that. I know the feeling of being used by someone you love and trust. Don't worry, be strong and everything will be fine! Good luck! *huggles and cream puffs*

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