
9/10/2006 c1
12Stormie Greye
Sometimes the thought into a poem overides the talent in it. Don't down your writing but make effort to improve. And I thought this was very sweet. :)

Sometimes the thought into a poem overides the talent in it. Don't down your writing but make effort to improve. And I thought this was very sweet. :)
6/29/2006 c1 Arcadia Lynch
Hey sweetie,Cute poem. I like that it ends up in a teardro shape.Yes, I go on the NW. My name on there is writer_faerie.
Hey sweetie,Cute poem. I like that it ends up in a teardro shape.Yes, I go on the NW. My name on there is writer_faerie.
6/22/2006 c1
61mothersuperiorjumpedthegun
Short but sweet. Not sure if it's a poem or not, but you should show it to your girlfriend. ;] "It's not like my other work is good or anything..." Au contrare; it is quite brilliant.

Short but sweet. Not sure if it's a poem or not, but you should show it to your girlfriend. ;] "It's not like my other work is good or anything..." Au contrare; it is quite brilliant.
6/7/2006 c1
64Leeona Trance
A shorty lil poem. It seems a lil shy with "Okay, so I love you." I like it.
~Leeona Trance
Pshaw, your writing is great. :3

A shorty lil poem. It seems a lil shy with "Okay, so I love you." I like it.
~Leeona Trance
Pshaw, your writing is great. :3