for You Don't Believe10/10/2006 c1 Meg
Oh yeah. I forgot to add something.
That last verse was fucking amazing.(yes, you get a fucking. Possibly the highest rating from me.)
"You don’t believe in hope,You don’t believe in miracles.You don’t believe in getting well,From a sickness you can’t escape."
- - -
It really really good Jack. Really good. I think this is on my favorites list.That very last line didn't really close it like I wanted it to though.But it was way good silly face.Really damn good.
Oh yeah. I forgot to add something.
That last verse was fucking amazing.(yes, you get a fucking. Possibly the highest rating from me.)
"You don’t believe in hope,You don’t believe in miracles.You don’t believe in getting well,From a sickness you can’t escape."
- - -
It really really good Jack. Really good. I think this is on my favorites list.That very last line didn't really close it like I wanted it to though.But it was way good silly face.Really damn good.
10/9/2006 c1 
8Amerie Marque
Azjerbaigan!
Dijambodi!
(That's country speak for 'I like this a lot'. I was just going to write something like this, then I was all, "Well, inspiration can stay for a bit, I'll see if my buddy put anything new up."
AND HERE IT IS.Except it's not new.
Well it's damn good. So shut up. Cause you can write better than I can.
=p
8Amerie MarqueAzjerbaigan!
Dijambodi!
(That's country speak for 'I like this a lot'. I was just going to write something like this, then I was all, "Well, inspiration can stay for a bit, I'll see if my buddy put anything new up."
AND HERE IT IS.Except it's not new.
Well it's damn good. So shut up. Cause you can write better than I can.
=p
7/4/2006 c1 delete this page 109231
again another poem that again i can realy relate to. oh well
keep writing
~Godly Luke Staden~
again another poem that again i can realy relate to. oh well
keep writing
~Godly Luke Staden~
7/3/2006 c1 21lordelfy
Overall this is not a bad poem at all. But i think it is a little too repetive. Nice job though.
21lordelfyOverall this is not a bad poem at all. But i think it is a little too repetive. Nice job though.
6/28/2006 c1 Blehk
This was very simple, but elegant. Sometimes, simplicity is key. This was one of those times.
I especially liked the lines: "You don’t believe in getting well,From a sickness you can’t escape.I do."
That was very nice. All in all, it was a pleasure.
This was very simple, but elegant. Sometimes, simplicity is key. This was one of those times.
I especially liked the lines: "You don’t believe in getting well,From a sickness you can’t escape.I do."
That was very nice. All in all, it was a pleasure.
6/22/2006 c1 61mothersuperiorjumpedthegun
Wow, I don't know why, but this is one of my new favorite poems. I especially like the last line, I thought it was quite witty of you. I like the format of the poem, it's quite similar to one of mine, I think (so of course I'd like it, right? ;])Well. Terrific poem. I Belive!
61mothersuperiorjumpedthegunWow, I don't know why, but this is one of my new favorite poems. I especially like the last line, I thought it was quite witty of you. I like the format of the poem, it's quite similar to one of mine, I think (so of course I'd like it, right? ;])Well. Terrific poem. I Belive!
6/13/2006 c1 2Adorian
Very clever. I enjoyed the way you started this out. Now you must give me a new review on "Kiddo". Let the spirit of writing live and the words flow.
2AdorianVery clever. I enjoyed the way you started this out. Now you must give me a new review on "Kiddo". Let the spirit of writing live and the words flow.
5/23/2006 c1 8Shooyi
Simple and straight to the point good job^_^ Oh yeah and I posted the next chapter to Death and Love
8ShooyiSimple and straight to the point good job^_^ Oh yeah and I posted the next chapter to Death and Love
5/21/2006 c1 92burning in effigy
Love the beginning. Sort of like a conversation between me and my friend when we were litte like: "Isaw a ghost last night" and "nuh-uh. there's no such thing as ghosts!" "is too!" "is not!" , etc.
and the ending was my favorite :)
92burning in effigyLove the beginning. Sort of like a conversation between me and my friend when we were litte like: "Isaw a ghost last night" and "nuh-uh. there's no such thing as ghosts!" "is too!" "is not!" , etc.
and the ending was my favorite :)
5/21/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
Oh, that's kind of sad.
And, yes, it't okay to call me Mei, as that is pretty close to my name. =)
37TaltushMeiMeiOh, that's kind of sad.
And, yes, it't okay to call me Mei, as that is pretty close to my name. =)