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6/29/2006 c1 kayttea
this is a really awesome poem! i love it!

i was just thinking how they made a movie like your play, pause, ff, and rewind poem. the movie with the remote thingy...anyways

have you read specials yet?
6/27/2006 c1 20whitecap-walker
this is sweet and sad. you do a great job capturing how the girl changed over time. i also really like how you keep returning to the theme of what could have been. keep writing. : )
5/22/2006 c1 ktspakiti
hmm... interesting. i relaly like it tho. your descriptions are awesome and your transition from her being a happy little girl to a sad teenager(?) was good too. not that i'm an expert but yeah. i liked it, good poem. :D
5/22/2006 c1 109ADSpencer
Oh, that's sad. Great work. That second to last stanza was my fave. Nice job.
5/21/2006 c1 trouble-makerz-4ever
i like it. it was very descriptive.

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