
6/29/2006 c1 kayttea
this is a really awesome poem! i love it!
i was just thinking how they made a movie like your play, pause, ff, and rewind poem. the movie with the remote thingy...anyways
have you read specials yet?
this is a really awesome poem! i love it!
i was just thinking how they made a movie like your play, pause, ff, and rewind poem. the movie with the remote thingy...anyways
have you read specials yet?
6/27/2006 c1
20whitecap-walker
this is sweet and sad. you do a great job capturing how the girl changed over time. i also really like how you keep returning to the theme of what could have been. keep writing. : )

this is sweet and sad. you do a great job capturing how the girl changed over time. i also really like how you keep returning to the theme of what could have been. keep writing. : )
5/22/2006 c1 ktspakiti
hmm... interesting. i relaly like it tho. your descriptions are awesome and your transition from her being a happy little girl to a sad teenager(?) was good too. not that i'm an expert but yeah. i liked it, good poem. :D
hmm... interesting. i relaly like it tho. your descriptions are awesome and your transition from her being a happy little girl to a sad teenager(?) was good too. not that i'm an expert but yeah. i liked it, good poem. :D