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1/25/2007 c1 83Jordan Alexis
Normally I'm really ADD when it comes reading (so it's hard for me to get into non-rhyming/structured poems), but I really like the idea behind this one. Last four lines are fantastic.
5/21/2006 c1 51Aetha Daemon
The informality of the tone is not cultured enough not to decrease from the value of the poem. I would refrain from 'tomboy' and 'girly-girl' stereotypes, as the are not powerful words. I don't even like SAYING the words, normally. It isn't deep enough to sound like a thought, but just a slim, emaciated thought. Don't try so hard, just let the words...come out.

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