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5/23/2006 c1 Little Junkie
there are a couple of akward sentences like:"Life would a burden to all""Never again would I hear you me"or more or less they just need to be edited so they make sense.

good idea behind the poem. needs more oomph if ya know what I mean. :):)
5/22/2006 c1 24Tad Zendol
OH MY GOODNESS! I'm going to cry right now... *Sniffle sniffle*. Even though I don't believe in that stuff, since I'm a Jew and all... Whatever. It was amazing though. I loved it. Very meaningful. Now let me cry in peace.-Runs away and starts wailing-

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