for Whorl5/23/2006 c1 
42Faye Coon
Wow this is so much more impressive! I felt like a genuine type of flowing! On a negative sidenote the words weren't beautifully and elaboratetly placed. But those you had chosen and the combination and linkage of then created a crisp image of the dusty season you seek to present. Don't stop writing, and as a suggestion, and referance to elaborate and stylyzed poetry look on to one of my poems, send an opinion or review if you like. Ciao.
-Coon
42Faye CoonWow this is so much more impressive! I felt like a genuine type of flowing! On a negative sidenote the words weren't beautifully and elaboratetly placed. But those you had chosen and the combination and linkage of then created a crisp image of the dusty season you seek to present. Don't stop writing, and as a suggestion, and referance to elaborate and stylyzed poetry look on to one of my poems, send an opinion or review if you like. Ciao.
-Coon