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7/28/2006 c1 8Katie123
I like this. I think a lot of teenagers can relate to it. I certainly went through a phase where I has no idea who I was. Good work.
5/23/2006 c1 24Tad Zendol
I love it. Great job. The power in the innocence of the actions is beautiful.
that was really good...honostly...it describes me...lol...sounds like a poem my bff mira hopesbane would've written
5/23/2006 c1 44catching-falling-stars
did you enter high school and start fussing about what people think and trying to listen to what people whispering? because a lot of people can lose themselves. at one point i did but luckily i found myself again in that jungle. i hope you find yourself and figure out what happenend to you. i like your poem but i think it would have made a better one-shot story.
5/23/2006 c1 Little Junkie
aw that was awesome! I'm in a good review mood hehe. no really, I didn't see the end coming. its so happy throughout the whole thing and then the end is so sad! AH I just realized its you Shooyi. YOu're awesome.

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