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10/25/2011 c27 jp
ahhhh totally loved it!
10/8/2011 c26 2readlife
Great story! I'm so curious to see what their step-grandfather is going to tell them.
10/2/2011 c26 Iluvrandomeness
Thank you so much for updating! Please keep up with the story, it's one of my favorites!
9/28/2011 c26 guest1
thanks for updating,cant wait for the next chapter!
7/19/2011 c25 1paintingclouds
I look forward to the update! The interweaving of Hammond back into the story was done very cleverly (I like your discreet name "Mr Aitch"!) - I was starting to feel a little more sympathetic to the man when he exhibited a little self-control. It helped me respect him a little bit more. And poor Allan too - I do feel sorry for him (at least presently)! It seems that all of the men cannot help but be infatuated with Jeanie. If not for Allan's unbecoming first impression (re Sophia; also, his trying to kiss Jeanie), I think I would prefer him over Jack. He seems so gentlemanly of late. Jack himself needs to wake up to his affections (if they are even there - if they are, certainly they are suppressed very very deep within him). It's a strange mixture of childish naivety and admirable bravery that seems to move Jeanie to pursue her Rose Boy. An intriguing theme that you've effectively developed throughout the story seems to be one's inability to choose whom they love - an annoying sense of destiny seems to painfully conflict with the spurts of emotion each character faces.

Maybe more character development of Sophia would add even a teensy bit more suspense to the story, though the story is very gripping nonetheless. Adding a little more depth to Sophia's character actually might confuse the reader, so I'll leave you to think about the possibilities surrounding that one. :) But yes, I can't seem to get over the feeling that Sophia's emotional connection with Jack will be awfully difficult to sever- from every angle.

Aaah, I apologise for the long, quite analytical review!
7/16/2011 c4 paintingclouds
Amazing! Very touching story - description is beautiful, very vivid. The end of the chapter brought tears to my eyes.
7/12/2011 c24 Crazy.Kc
I just read your story and I'm really hoping you update soon. And I'm surprised you don't have many reviews. Everything is wonderfully written and you draw the reader into the story. Can't wait to read more =)
7/1/2011 c24 7rgarner31
i hate to go against some other reviewers, and i think hammond took on a sweeter light here, but no matter what i cant shake this feeling like hes a creepy pedafile guy...i mean hes like 30 or 40 right? and shes 14?... oh well :P

I feel like this is a real, published book and am so excited for a new chapter! Im wondering who Jeanine is going to end up with! fingers crossed for O'Hannigan XD great new chapter and story you got going here!
5/5/2011 c24 2readlife
This story keeps getting better and better! Although I miss the knowledge that was in some of the chapters, romance wise it has added another level. I hope Mr. Hammond doesn't disappear forever.
4/27/2011 c24 7Tippers2
This chapter rather makes me wish that Jeanine would like Hammond. :D And now O'Hannigan knows...quite interesting!
4/18/2011 c23 2readlife
I think I may like this Hammond/ Ellison development...

As always I enjoyed the chapter and can't wait till the next one.
1/17/2011 c21 EmptySh3ll
I feel bad for Allen since he truly likes (maybe love?) Jeanine and yet it seems that the story is favoring Jack. However, then I feel weird the Jeanine must settle for Sophia's leftovers. I mean, I just have a lot of problems since I don't know which way to go, but that just means this is a good story.
1/12/2011 c21 alakazam05
i was wondering where captain travers would enter the picture and finally he was mentioned. i hope he will really make an appearance.

jorie is adorable! i expect the story to speed up but i hope the intricacies of the plot won't be sacrificed.

as much as i like Jack, coz he's a good friend to Jeanie, i'm rooting for Allan now. i hope she sees the good in him. Jeanie is too stuck in her past feelings for Jack. And somehow I hope Connor O'Hannigan will play a bigger role in Jeanie's life.
1/11/2011 c21 AresScarletRaven
I really love your story but I don't understand what Colin has to gain from Jeanine being out at sea; why would he even bother to force her on the boat?

Jack would have already been out to sea by the time they reached him and again what does he gain from sending Jack out? Yes, he causes drama but he seems like he's needlessly putting a lot of time and money into making sure Jack stays there, he could just pick another poor sap from the streets and press him without spending a dime.

Well, I can't wait for the next update.
12/14/2010 c20 2music-whiskers
Your story is just so much fun to read. I am so glad you updated. Adding a side story if possible would give this story more depth and less of a such a straight forward feeling.
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