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9/25/2008 c3 Hidden Flowers
Would it be possible to get you to update?
7/6/2006 c3 2Flying Ninja of the Midmorning
^_^ Two new chapters!

And where have I been for them...?

Sadly... Not here. ^_^;;

I've been writing fanfictions lately.. Nehh...

OH! Yeah. Chapters= YAY!

But, as everyone else has pointed out: description!

Other than that... It is yay.


Peach Mouse
6/10/2006 c3 1pink.puff
Good job, but as everyone I still think that more description is needed, but the plot seems great!

6/8/2006 c2 1GeorgyannWayson
too short. More description is also in order, but good job so far.


6/8/2006 c1 GeorgyannWayson
Good dictation. Maybe more description?


6/8/2006 c2 13Faded Soulfire
I'm interested in where you plan on taking this. The only thing is that this story seems to be really outweighed by dialogue. I'd really like it if you would put some more detail into the story, so that I understand what the characters look like, and also so that I can get a better idea of the area of California where she's staying.

I think longer chapters would be awesome, but that's up to you. And to me, it seems like these first two chapters couldn't be combined since they're so short, but I'm not complaining. This is your story and I still will read it whether you take my advice to heart or not. And I don't say this about many stories, either. I'm interested in another chapter. Maybe update soonish? That would be really wonderful.

Faded Soulfire
6/3/2006 c1 2Flying Ninja of the Midmorning
Tayylloorr. It's Leah, coming to haunt you. ^_^

Anywho. You really should continue... Or I'll die! ...Or force a shounen-ai roleplay on you! Teehee. So continue, for both of our sakes!

PS. Go and read my stories too!

-A very Dakotalicious story-

Peach Mouse
5/25/2006 c1 1pink.puff
Hey, this might get interesting, and I like the way you write! I was just left clueless about Kaitlin's and Tyler's appearance, maybe you could describe them next? Keep going!


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