for Sadistic9/25/2006 c1 
21Reaper
Hmm...is okay compared to most of your other work. I'll note this in mind.
~Reaper
21ReaperHmm...is okay compared to most of your other work. I'll note this in mind.
~Reaper
5/25/2006 c1 3Elochai
I'm going to keep this story in mind because it looks promising. ^^;
I'd like to add that you're doing alot of character development in the early pages which is good - But I think you should choose one PoV for it, because the change is disorientating and distracting, just a little.
That and I can't wait for them to stop talking.
Anticipation of the title. Thank you for this story insofar.
3ElochaiI'm going to keep this story in mind because it looks promising. ^^;
I'd like to add that you're doing alot of character development in the early pages which is good - But I think you should choose one PoV for it, because the change is disorientating and distracting, just a little.
That and I can't wait for them to stop talking.
Anticipation of the title. Thank you for this story insofar.