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9/25/2006 c1 21Reaper
Hmm...is okay compared to most of your other work. I'll note this in mind.

6/13/2006 c1 Pumpkin4565
suck your as.s elizabeth ugly
5/26/2006 c1 2writergurlLW
maria stared at...
5/25/2006 c1 3Elochai
I'm going to keep this story in mind because it looks promising. ^^;

I'd like to add that you're doing alot of character development in the early pages which is good - But I think you should choose one PoV for it, because the change is disorientating and distracting, just a little.

That and I can't wait for them to stop talking.

Anticipation of the title. Thank you for this story insofar.
5/25/2006 c1 4BobZombie
Aside from it ending in the middle of a sentence, it was awesome :) Definitely keep writing!
5/24/2006 c1 1hired
Freaky, but the chapter ended on an unfinished note. It's definitely well-written. I applaud your originality. ^_^

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