for A Life in the Friday School Situation5/24/2006 c1 
73An Inside Joke
This was very difficult to follow because you rarely wrote in complete sentences, and grammatical errors made it almost impossible to get what was going on half the time. Try to revise future chapters.
73An Inside JokeThis was very difficult to follow because you rarely wrote in complete sentences, and grammatical errors made it almost impossible to get what was going on half the time. Try to revise future chapters.