
5/24/2006 c1
13Shadowhound
Change 'oceans' to 'shore' and I'll agree with you more easily =P. Actually, I agree with what you say in the poem. The only problem is that it's easier in theory than in practice.
Shadowhound

Change 'oceans' to 'shore' and I'll agree with you more easily =P. Actually, I agree with what you say in the poem. The only problem is that it's easier in theory than in practice.
Shadowhound
5/24/2006 c1
152stephen7687
I like how the poem breaks out of hte pages of "writing" in the line "Let them glide through the mountains, soar over the oceans" very good. please r&r mine if you get a chance. ty ~steve

I like how the poem breaks out of hte pages of "writing" in the line "Let them glide through the mountains, soar over the oceans" very good. please r&r mine if you get a chance. ty ~steve