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5/24/2006 c1 13Shadowhound
Change 'oceans' to 'shore' and I'll agree with you more easily =P. Actually, I agree with what you say in the poem. The only problem is that it's easier in theory than in practice.

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5/24/2006 c1 152stephen7687
I like how the poem breaks out of hte pages of "writing" in the line "Let them glide through the mountains, soar over the oceans" very good. please r&r mine if you get a chance. ty ~steve

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