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10/25/2006 c1 5outdamnedspot
nice! a bit angsty though. Really nice descriptive language. I loved this bit. ' Like mercury to the sun, clouds swirling in my eyes.' Anyways, write on!
5/27/2006 c1 Phantom
Why do you hurt so much?
5/26/2006 c1 60Lovejoy
High levels of angst permeate this piece; strong words and vivid pictures conjure up an idea of someone who's more than just 'slipping', more than falling done, it sounds like you've already slipped and fallen. Mwah! Poor sweet baby!

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