for Superhero Dreams12/11/2008 c1 
1Adi Sagestar
I love this. The word effects are great, they really drive the message home. If you are looking for a btter title, you might try something along the lines of "Song of a Superhero", although I think the one you have now works just fine.
Best regards,
Adi
1Adi SagestarI love this. The word effects are great, they really drive the message home. If you are looking for a btter title, you might try something along the lines of "Song of a Superhero", although I think the one you have now works just fine.
Best regards,
Adi
5/27/2006 c1 20finding the right words
i love superheros too. but i wouldn't want to be one. i enjoyed your take on it, and the changing of the words (ex: italics, boldened, periods between letters, etc.).
20finding the right wordsi love superheros too. but i wouldn't want to be one. i enjoyed your take on it, and the changing of the words (ex: italics, boldened, periods between letters, etc.).
5/27/2006 c1 14Krzcowzgomoo
Yay! You used my line! and Yay! it was really good! As for the title...how about 'I am your hero'? *shrugs* just a suggestion...
14KrzcowzgomooYay! You used my line! and Yay! it was really good! As for the title...how about 'I am your hero'? *shrugs* just a suggestion...