for Seers of Eternity: Beyond Eternity7/21/2006 c5 katelyn
im likeing it alot and hawke and haze should really go out for real and O M G(lol) i didnt know this was in the future it is in the future right well u got to call when chapter six is posted i feel like im waiting for the next harry potter book I WANT TO KNOW WATS GOING TO HAPPEN AND I WANT TO KNOW NOW! hehehehe u better hurry Luv YaKatelyn
im likeing it alot and hawke and haze should really go out for real and O M G(lol) i didnt know this was in the future it is in the future right well u got to call when chapter six is posted i feel like im waiting for the next harry potter book I WANT TO KNOW WATS GOING TO HAPPEN AND I WANT TO KNOW NOW! hehehehe u better hurry Luv YaKatelyn
7/18/2006 c1 Katelyn
Hi,it me katelyn again i noticed u up dated your story so i printed all the chapters off so i could curl up in bed and read them and when i was done printing them i remembered i have no more black ink so its all in colors lol so now im going to go read it i will let u know wat i think in the moring(i spelled that wrong)
so Yea LULASKAT
P.S i dont like only haveing a chapter mostly deicated to me i want the whole thing and if your going to deicate a chapter to me then y not the whole book cuz im just that wonderful nah im j/k i think it is sweet that u decatied the 3rd chapter (my newly favorite chapter ) to all your friends well this is becomeing way to long and im starting to think i should have just sent an email or call or something cuz this isnt even about your book so yea i ttul lulas bye
Hi,it me katelyn again i noticed u up dated your story so i printed all the chapters off so i could curl up in bed and read them and when i was done printing them i remembered i have no more black ink so its all in colors lol so now im going to go read it i will let u know wat i think in the moring(i spelled that wrong)
so Yea LULASKAT
P.S i dont like only haveing a chapter mostly deicated to me i want the whole thing and if your going to deicate a chapter to me then y not the whole book cuz im just that wonderful nah im j/k i think it is sweet that u decatied the 3rd chapter (my newly favorite chapter ) to all your friends well this is becomeing way to long and im starting to think i should have just sent an email or call or something cuz this isnt even about your book so yea i ttul lulas bye
7/2/2006 c5 
34daedal
lol, so does Snowe have a crush on Shade, or is that just be searching out romantic stuff? That would be a cute pairing. And I'm sure no one blames you for pinning the blame on Russian and America, since they were the ones who started the whole nuclear war thing ages ago. It's interesting, I hadn't realised you'd placed this story in the future of our real world, it thought it was all made up. But it works. You completly tore apart my theory that Hawke was actually the Hunter and has been betraying them all and was only still with Haze because he was trying to get more info, but oh well. I'll have come up with another one soon ;) Keep it up!
34daedallol, so does Snowe have a crush on Shade, or is that just be searching out romantic stuff? That would be a cute pairing. And I'm sure no one blames you for pinning the blame on Russian and America, since they were the ones who started the whole nuclear war thing ages ago. It's interesting, I hadn't realised you'd placed this story in the future of our real world, it thought it was all made up. But it works. You completly tore apart my theory that Hawke was actually the Hunter and has been betraying them all and was only still with Haze because he was trying to get more info, but oh well. I'll have come up with another one soon ;) Keep it up!
6/30/2006 c5 19Olivine
i gave you my finger hurting story, right? so thats why ill have to keep this short, too. i actually read this a couple days ago, when you updated it. (my fingers were a lot worse, then) so i dont particularly remember every tiny detail. but i do remember whats going on, and all i can really say is: update soon! plus haze and hawke are awesome, the two. also, the narrating by shade was fine. at least we know whats going on over there.
keep on writing and update soon (obviously) ~~MEWR-:|:-
19Olivinei gave you my finger hurting story, right? so thats why ill have to keep this short, too. i actually read this a couple days ago, when you updated it. (my fingers were a lot worse, then) so i dont particularly remember every tiny detail. but i do remember whats going on, and all i can really say is: update soon! plus haze and hawke are awesome, the two. also, the narrating by shade was fine. at least we know whats going on over there.
keep on writing and update soon (obviously) ~~MEWR-:|:-
6/29/2006 c5 3Adaku
wow, this is a great chapter. Once again you amaze me, Aredhel Vardamir. Keep up the great work. Till next time
waterhealer
3Adakuwow, this is a great chapter. Once again you amaze me, Aredhel Vardamir. Keep up the great work. Till next time
waterhealer
6/28/2006 c5 5Almree
*sigh* you are to good at stopping in just the right place (or wrong, depending on the way you look at it.) Nuts! I will be gone for a few days so I will have to whit before I can read anymore! (if you put it up well I’m gone, that is) So I shall come and read what you have up when I get back! Keep writting!
5Almree*sigh* you are to good at stopping in just the right place (or wrong, depending on the way you look at it.) Nuts! I will be gone for a few days so I will have to whit before I can read anymore! (if you put it up well I’m gone, that is) So I shall come and read what you have up when I get back! Keep writting!
6/28/2006 c5 2Ame Megami
Harumph. I am ashamed to say, HawkexHaze are a little cute. A LITTLE, mind you. A tinsy, tiny bit. Miniscule. Sean and Tempest are cuter. I like the SeerxHunter combo. =P
2Ame MegamiHarumph. I am ashamed to say, HawkexHaze are a little cute. A LITTLE, mind you. A tinsy, tiny bit. Miniscule. Sean and Tempest are cuter. I like the SeerxHunter combo. =P
6/27/2006 c4 5Almree
*grins* sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while. I must have not remembered how many chapters there where when I last did. Oh well I’m here now so *shrug* on to the review! Wow! You like to make it a mystery on where this story is going, *raises one eyebrow* will we ever now what is going to happen? I wonder. Well keep up the good work and update soon!
5Almree*grins* sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while. I must have not remembered how many chapters there where when I last did. Oh well I’m here now so *shrug* on to the review! Wow! You like to make it a mystery on where this story is going, *raises one eyebrow* will we ever now what is going to happen? I wonder. Well keep up the good work and update soon!
6/27/2006 c4 3Adaku
Wow, you updated that fast. NIce chapter though. You did a great job. I like the relationship of Haze and Hawke. Keep up the great work. Till next time
waterhealer
3AdakuWow, you updated that fast. NIce chapter though. You did a great job. I like the relationship of Haze and Hawke. Keep up the great work. Till next time
waterhealer
6/26/2006 c4 34daedal
Another chapter so soon? XD You so deserve to beat your mum. I love the relationship between Hawke and Haze now! It's so sweet! I'm kinda confused about the weird relationship between the Hunter and Hawke. Either they're the same person, or they're related somehow - I can see that being majorly important. That'd be so awesome if they were brothers! Anywho, keep it up ^^
34daedalAnother chapter so soon? XD You so deserve to beat your mum. I love the relationship between Hawke and Haze now! It's so sweet! I'm kinda confused about the weird relationship between the Hunter and Hawke. Either they're the same person, or they're related somehow - I can see that being majorly important. That'd be so awesome if they were brothers! Anywho, keep it up ^^
6/26/2006 c4 19Olivine
wow, im glad you actually DID update so quickly! ...not that i was doubting you...or...anything... hehe. anyways, its just getting sweeter and sweeter between those two. i love that. LOVE it! the next chapter's pov should be hawke, just so we can see if he has feelings for haze. pretty please? or better yet, actually, snowe or shade since we've got no clue where they are. or MAYBE (ideas keep coming, sorry) you could do it so that half of it is snow/shade telling 'bout surroundings, worry for haze and hawke, and then the other half being the pov of hawke, proclaiming his undying love for haze. heehee, that so totally wins. :)
oh, wow, did you see that avitar episode from forever ago, when aang's being trained by toph in that place that kind of reminds me of the grand canyon? that was hilarious! i loved it, and i watched it TWICE (dvr, haha). and the little sabertooth moose cub thingy was awesome. i was hoping he would go with sokka be his new pet, like momo is with aang (havent actually seen that flying lemur in a while...) but oh well. haha, point is, i LOVE sokka. he's hilarious. "Now come back, boomerang" i almost fell off the couch i was laughing so hard at that. and then "Cuz that's pretty much me. Sokka, the sarcastic meat-eating guy" or something like that. i love sokka. well, anyways, i know that was completely off track and a little outdated (that was a LLOONG time ago...) i still love that episode. anyways...
keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-
19Olivinewow, im glad you actually DID update so quickly! ...not that i was doubting you...or...anything... hehe. anyways, its just getting sweeter and sweeter between those two. i love that. LOVE it! the next chapter's pov should be hawke, just so we can see if he has feelings for haze. pretty please? or better yet, actually, snowe or shade since we've got no clue where they are. or MAYBE (ideas keep coming, sorry) you could do it so that half of it is snow/shade telling 'bout surroundings, worry for haze and hawke, and then the other half being the pov of hawke, proclaiming his undying love for haze. heehee, that so totally wins. :)
oh, wow, did you see that avitar episode from forever ago, when aang's being trained by toph in that place that kind of reminds me of the grand canyon? that was hilarious! i loved it, and i watched it TWICE (dvr, haha). and the little sabertooth moose cub thingy was awesome. i was hoping he would go with sokka be his new pet, like momo is with aang (havent actually seen that flying lemur in a while...) but oh well. haha, point is, i LOVE sokka. he's hilarious. "Now come back, boomerang" i almost fell off the couch i was laughing so hard at that. and then "Cuz that's pretty much me. Sokka, the sarcastic meat-eating guy" or something like that. i love sokka. well, anyways, i know that was completely off track and a little outdated (that was a LLOONG time ago...) i still love that episode. anyways...
keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-
6/25/2006 c4 2Ame Megami
-huff- Fine. But I claim Chance. He's...-content sigh- I claim Chance...((:P))
2Ame Megami-huff- Fine. But I claim Chance. He's...-content sigh- I claim Chance...((:P))
6/25/2006 c3 3Adaku
My summer had been over a long time ago. Anyway, great chiffhanger- I wonder who's the one holding her throat? Keep up the great work
waterhealer
3AdakuMy summer had been over a long time ago. Anyway, great chiffhanger- I wonder who's the one holding her throat? Keep up the great work
waterhealer
6/24/2006 c3 34daedal
*screams* Nonononono! You can't end it with ANOTHER cliffie? *pulls hair out* Hurry hurry hurry! Please don't let Hawke be evil, please don't let Hawke be evil! *cries*
*calms down* I'll stop now. I noticed one teeny mistake... "Haze’s eyes cleared as she came face to face with Hawke." This story is in the first person, so surely it should be 'My eyes cleared...'
Oh, and KEEP WRITING! *dances* Beat your mum, beat your mum! lol
34daedal*screams* Nonononono! You can't end it with ANOTHER cliffie? *pulls hair out* Hurry hurry hurry! Please don't let Hawke be evil, please don't let Hawke be evil! *cries*
*calms down* I'll stop now. I noticed one teeny mistake... "Haze’s eyes cleared as she came face to face with Hawke." This story is in the first person, so surely it should be 'My eyes cleared...'
Oh, and KEEP WRITING! *dances* Beat your mum, beat your mum! lol
6/23/2006 c3 2Ame Megami
You kidding? I'm about ready to murder Haze...-snarl- What about that charry we made up? Shade's looks, Hawke's humor and something else...oh, think Yuri! -hits self- Ah, well. forgetfullness.
~Ame~
2Ame MegamiYou kidding? I'm about ready to murder Haze...-snarl- What about that charry we made up? Shade's looks, Hawke's humor and something else...oh, think Yuri! -hits self- Ah, well. forgetfullness.
~Ame~