for Fairy Tale8/10/2006 c1 
12Piddiffle
That is very sad and slightly bitter, but i do quite like it. The fairy tale touches were very nice, and effective. It is a wonderful little poem. A couple little things though, Cinderella was a maid, not a made, I do believe. And it was a lion, a witch perhaps, and then a beast. But your the author, so i know nothing
12PiddiffleThat is very sad and slightly bitter, but i do quite like it. The fairy tale touches were very nice, and effective. It is a wonderful little poem. A couple little things though, Cinderella was a maid, not a made, I do believe. And it was a lion, a witch perhaps, and then a beast. But your the author, so i know nothing