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1/30/2003 c1 Sardonxy
Well, this story is open ended...very open ended. What is going on here, you should go more in depth with this cause it is vague.
3/14/2001 c1 BarretM82A1
Hmm...Not bad. Very little exploration of the characters but then I guess there's no real need. Everything is pretty vague though. It'd still be interesting to read what followed those events, from the next morning however.
2/28/2001 c1 Guest
The dialogue wasn't bad, but it didn't go anywhere. Open-ended stories are supposed open ends to leave for thought.

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