for Covet5/31/2010 c6 
7miss-life
So you said you'll only post chapters up to the wedding, right? So only one or max. two chapters? This will end way to quickly =/
I feel so sorry for her mother, to have to let go of the one you love, just because he's a soldier. And then keep seeing him every day. It would probably rip me apart.
That's one of the best things in your story! All these raw emotions that we can still relate too, even though the story is set way back in time.
Tina
7miss-lifeSo you said you'll only post chapters up to the wedding, right? So only one or max. two chapters? This will end way to quickly =/
I feel so sorry for her mother, to have to let go of the one you love, just because he's a soldier. And then keep seeing him every day. It would probably rip me apart.
That's one of the best things in your story! All these raw emotions that we can still relate too, even though the story is set way back in time.
Tina
5/27/2010 c6 BluNyghtLeo
Beautiful, tantalizing...I know I wont b able to read much more so... I want to buy this. NOW! XD!
*This is me loving it*
Beautiful, tantalizing...I know I wont b able to read much more so... I want to buy this. NOW! XD!
*This is me loving it*
5/27/2010 c6 8Emerald123
The story seems to have changed quite a bit. You must have done a lot of editing. It's better! It's a lot better, deeper. Great job.
8Emerald123The story seems to have changed quite a bit. You must have done a lot of editing. It's better! It's a lot better, deeper. Great job.
5/22/2010 c5 1QueenofRoses
Re-reading this, I'm reminding just how beautiful it is. I can see your words like a picture in my mind, and I keep seeing them even after I finish reading. I absolutely adore this story. When it is published, I will buy so many copies I will single-handedly put you on the best seller's list (well... maybe not quite that many, but I'll try). Keep the work up, it's going well! The only question I have is how do you pronounce Lucas's dad's name now?
1QueenofRosesRe-reading this, I'm reminding just how beautiful it is. I can see your words like a picture in my mind, and I keep seeing them even after I finish reading. I absolutely adore this story. When it is published, I will buy so many copies I will single-handedly put you on the best seller's list (well... maybe not quite that many, but I'll try). Keep the work up, it's going well! The only question I have is how do you pronounce Lucas's dad's name now?
5/20/2010 c5 BluNyghtLeo
This story is so captivating, I'm happy I found it. Your writing is truly wonderful and I can only wish for more. If this is published I would definitely buy a copy of it ^-^.
This story is so captivating, I'm happy I found it. Your writing is truly wonderful and I can only wish for more. If this is published I would definitely buy a copy of it ^-^.
5/19/2010 c5 Readaholic205
I didnt think that I could like this story anymore than the first one. But you proved me wrong. It is very well written and captivating. Amazing.
I didnt think that I could like this story anymore than the first one. But you proved me wrong. It is very well written and captivating. Amazing.
5/18/2010 c1 3love-of-words
And here I was thinking that this story couldn't get any better than it was before. The rewrite is masterful. Easily one of the most well-written and thought out stories on this site. Awesome!
3love-of-wordsAnd here I was thinking that this story couldn't get any better than it was before. The rewrite is masterful. Easily one of the most well-written and thought out stories on this site. Awesome!
5/18/2010 c5 2jessie0754
I'm still confused about her father ...
but yes. Loving the story :) and I really can't tell where you're going with this ... I really hope you like happy endings ;D
2jessie0754I'm still confused about her father ...
but yes. Loving the story :) and I really can't tell where you're going with this ... I really hope you like happy endings ;D
5/18/2010 c4 7miss-life
This is probably one of my favorite story on FP! I can't wait to see how you've changed the plot from the previous version :D
Tina
7miss-lifeThis is probably one of my favorite story on FP! I can't wait to see how you've changed the plot from the previous version :D
Tina
5/10/2010 c4 2jessie0754
Interesting ... with the history repeating itself bit.
Are you editing atm, or just writing it? I remember reading somewhere that it's the latter :P Just curious!
2jessie0754Interesting ... with the history repeating itself bit.
Are you editing atm, or just writing it? I remember reading somewhere that it's the latter :P Just curious!
5/9/2010 c4 Readaholic205
I dont know if I can say it enough but I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. I wish you all the luck in getting it published.
I dont know if I can say it enough but I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. I wish you all the luck in getting it published.