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3Black-Haired-Beauty
Well this sounds really interesting! Please update soon! I cant wait to read more!
3Black-Haired-BeautyWell this sounds really interesting! Please update soon! I cant wait to read more!
5/27/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
o, this story is so sweet. u really should continue it. I was a little confused when you started to talk about King David, and the Witch King of Endor. Is Tisbeth and Lorien and Carmel all part of a make believe world, or is it suppose to be part of the real world?
Did you get the name Lorien from Lothlorien in the Lord of the Rings? And what about the Witch of Endor? that too?
64Arwen Starfireo, this story is so sweet. u really should continue it. I was a little confused when you started to talk about King David, and the Witch King of Endor. Is Tisbeth and Lorien and Carmel all part of a make believe world, or is it suppose to be part of the real world?
Did you get the name Lorien from Lothlorien in the Lord of the Rings? And what about the Witch of Endor? that too?
5/27/2006 c1 WinterInTheAttic
I love this! It is so realistic and well written, and I couldn't tell what would happen next even in the first chapter. Amazingly done! I can't wait for more.
I love this! It is so realistic and well written, and I couldn't tell what would happen next even in the first chapter. Amazingly done! I can't wait for more.
5/27/2006 c1 1Murasaki Blossom16
O.O My gosh! That was so good! How come there's only one chapter? Please write more! I look forward to it! ^_^
1Murasaki Blossom16O.O My gosh! That was so good! How come there's only one chapter? Please write more! I look forward to it! ^_^
5/27/2006 c1 72Iris Early
Aww, that's so sweet. I very much liked your beginning - almost thought it was going to be something else until the next few lines caught me. You portrayed the children very well - lovely perspective. xx
72Iris EarlyAww, that's so sweet. I very much liked your beginning - almost thought it was going to be something else until the next few lines caught me. You portrayed the children very well - lovely perspective. xx
5/27/2006 c1 9Phoebe Love
I'm glad this story is back. I love the interaction between Lucas and Adee.
Feebs
9Phoebe LoveI'm glad this story is back. I love the interaction between Lucas and Adee.
Feebs