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5/11/2004 c1 78LovesLostCat
really good, kind of creepy tho but I like it.
4/7/2004 c1 123Velvet Reverie
Yeah...I do believe in the whole "Big Brother" theory. Can EVERYONE become president? Sure, if you're a white male over the age of 35 who has tons of money...God work!
~I'llputtheLAUGHTERinSLUAGHTER~
6/5/2003 c1 1An Aspiring Writer
I think it is good. Write a sequel about Ryan's life.
10/7/2001 c1 7Bilbo Yasmin
I really like that, your a wonderful writer.
3/25/2001 c1 Iolanthe
weird... creepy... hmmmm... yeah. Really well-written.
3/11/2001 c1 99Little Miss Shadow
Thought provoking and poetic both at the same time. Short and sweet - in a good way. It has an open ending and yet it's quite satisfying. Good work. :)
3/9/2001 c1 17L'acteur
I think this would make a great prologue to a longer story. One thing that I thought was that you shouldn't try to "defend" yourself by saying you aren't a conspiracy theorist. Let the reader guess.
3/8/2001 c1 1Sopher Forbes
Short and very much to the point. I liked it. It seems to me that you know what you want to say and say it without deadwood. Very nice.
3/6/2001 c1 Amber
I really liked your story. Well-written and the theme is very true (I think so anyway). :-)
3/5/2001 c1 7The Lighter Side of Darkness
wow, cool. thats scary, it brings a whole new meaning to fate.

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