for The Locked Door8/5/2024 c1 muahahaha
muahahahahah
100 kids in da basement
muahahahah
muahahahahah
100 kids in da basement
muahahahah
3/23/2024 c1 Guest
Poki
Poki
8/28/2023 c1 Guest
failed,next pleasd
failed,next pleasd
11/17/2022 c1 Mariam
This is the best story I have ever readed before
This is the best story I have ever readed before
5/3/2021 c1 sally
very good short story. This has giving me a great idea for my future writing peices. Very well done!
very good short story. This has giving me a great idea for my future writing peices. Very well done!
3/28/2019 c1 Essaylover
Nice, although it could make more sense. The language is nice and authentic. Thanks for helping me with my homework!
Nice, although it could make more sense. The language is nice and authentic. Thanks for helping me with my homework!
3/9/2016 c1 delgermurun
good essay
good essay
3/22/2015 c1 Diya
Nice one. The end could have been a more Cliff-hanger type
Nice one. The end could have been a more Cliff-hanger type
2/11/2015 c1 hakimi
made me really scared and worried for her ...overall i really liked it ... thank you
made me really scared and worried for her ...overall i really liked it ... thank you
11/21/2014 c1 Guest
AMAZING
AMAZING
2/11/2014 c1 Eeman
It is written beautifully,
It is written beautifully,
11/30/2013 c1 Author Chas
I was waiting for a better ending...
I was waiting for a better ending...
8/22/2013 c1 loooobobbogofogr
would she be carrying a length of wire
be careful
would she be carrying a length of wire
be careful
8/22/2013 c1 poo
it is its not its
it is its not its
10/6/2012 c1 omoefe
excellent
excellent