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7/8/2006 c1 110KonekOniko
I like the title of this piece...it's attention-grabbing. Anyways, I like this piece, it's very simple, yet perfect. Oh, and I absolutely love your use of allusions =).
7/3/2006 c1 24IwasSmitten
The first two lines are my favorite and I like the similie.
6/22/2006 c1 123Black and White Dreams
Patronus... W00T! I love that last line. Beautiful, beautiful.

*::~Cat~::*
6/14/2006 c1 11ofbg
woot fellow harry potter fan.
6/14/2006 c1 11traveler888
It kind of reminds me of a cloud. Good job! I like it. And thanks for giving me feedback on my poem!
6/13/2006 c1 55Lellida
Mm, I can imagine the liquid sliding down my throat. Lovely imagery, especially the way you associated white and silver with the drink.
6/10/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful descriptions
5/31/2006 c1 11Katybuckets
pretty :) pleasant imagery Easy to read thanks for the review btw
5/31/2006 c1 5Just Crane
oh so u did put that vera thing on. cool. i didnt even see it at first.
5/31/2006 c1 30candyaddict
lol. your last line is just perfect. the images you use to personify aloe vera are gorgeous. write on!

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