for Black Scorpion8/2/2006 c3 
1ngt
I like the concept of this story.
I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. Anywho please write more soon, as they say in the mc donalds commercial...im lovin' it.
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1ngtI like the concept of this story.
I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. Anywho please write more soon, as they say in the mc donalds commercial...im lovin' it.
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7/25/2006 c3 CaFFy
That's it? I wait so long for this little? TT_TT WRITE MORRE! I COMMAND THEE! ahah... ignore me...
That's it? I wait so long for this little? TT_TT WRITE MORRE! I COMMAND THEE! ahah... ignore me...
7/25/2006 c3 WitchGhost
I thought this story was dead for a moment. I'm glad it's not though because I enjoyed the chapter.
I thought this story was dead for a moment. I'm glad it's not though because I enjoyed the chapter.
6/7/2006 c2 20Xelena
i really like how this starts out and how Jamie reacts to everybody else, especially Garrett and Kieran. please continue
20Xelenai really like how this starts out and how Jamie reacts to everybody else, especially Garrett and Kieran. please continue
5/31/2006 c1 WitchGhost
I liked this one and will read more. I'll put more constructive critisim latter if I find somethuing to critize.
I liked this one and will read more. I'll put more constructive critisim latter if I find somethuing to critize.
5/31/2006 c1 Widom
Oh...*pounce*
I love this already. Jamie is very strong, very interesting, and Keiran has got to be the nicest gang memeber I've ever heard of...neat. Nice surprise for a otherwise miserable day. :)
Oh...*pounce*
I love this already. Jamie is very strong, very interesting, and Keiran has got to be the nicest gang memeber I've ever heard of...neat. Nice surprise for a otherwise miserable day. :)