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5/31/2006 c1 34mylittlechangingtruths
something in me twisted when i read this. hopefully you'll take that as a compliment. this poem was very very.. umm.. true. yeah. I don't mean that it told the truth, but that it WAS truth. am i making any sense at all? probably not.. i like this. very much.
5/31/2006 c1 hey maria
I love the questions you pose to this, and the way you describe the colors most of all. The repetition of "we will crumble" is just the perfect ending to such a great poem. Nice job.

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