for Stroll6/14/2006 c1 
11ofbg
i decided to read some of your stuff cuz i appreciated that you reviewed me.I like this one. i like the simple imagery. short but to the point (not a bad thing). I especially like the spreading rainbow (and for some reason i pictured someone with rainbow hair because of the previous line).
11ofbgi decided to read some of your stuff cuz i appreciated that you reviewed me.I like this one. i like the simple imagery. short but to the point (not a bad thing). I especially like the spreading rainbow (and for some reason i pictured someone with rainbow hair because of the previous line).
6/13/2006 c1 55Lellida
Ooh I like it. I think you should add the sentence from the summary to the end of the poem, and it would make a bigger impact. That's just my opinion.
55LellidaOoh I like it. I think you should add the sentence from the summary to the end of the poem, and it would make a bigger impact. That's just my opinion.
5/31/2006 c1 5Just Crane
love it. this is the favorite out of all of the short poems that u have written so far. UPDATE but please do it after ur FINALS!
5Just Cranelove it. this is the favorite out of all of the short poems that u have written so far. UPDATE but please do it after ur FINALS!