for That's So Abnormal9/16/2007 c15 
19ihrtbks
That was so cute. I love how you put a different type of drama in, a type that matches the setting! It's similar rumors and jealousy but the setting changes how everything is played out. Just adorable...I really can't think of anything else to describe it.
*CLAPS*
19ihrtbksThat was so cute. I love how you put a different type of drama in, a type that matches the setting! It's similar rumors and jealousy but the setting changes how everything is played out. Just adorable...I really can't think of anything else to describe it.
*CLAPS*
9/1/2007 c8 5Emote Control
America did *not* gain independence from Great Britain in 1776, that was the year of the *Declaration* of Independence. Actual independence did not occur until the Treaty of Paris in 1783.
Other than that, it's a great story! Keep up the good work!
5Emote ControlAmerica did *not* gain independence from Great Britain in 1776, that was the year of the *Declaration* of Independence. Actual independence did not occur until the Treaty of Paris in 1783.
Other than that, it's a great story! Keep up the good work!
4/3/2007 c15 8Megan-TheWriter
Okay...so I'm curious about a few things.
1) Did "Luke" and you actually get married? Or was that dream fake? lol. Or is it too soon to say? Har har.
Uhm. I had something else but I happened to forget.
I liked it:)
8Megan-TheWriterOkay...so I'm curious about a few things.
1) Did "Luke" and you actually get married? Or was that dream fake? lol. Or is it too soon to say? Har har.
Uhm. I had something else but I happened to forget.
I liked it:)
4/3/2007 c6 Megan-TheWriter
I find it really amusing that this is based on a true story. Autobiographical or wahtever.
But I suggest making some form of...divider? when you switch times and scenes and whatver. It's like...suddenly its 20 minutes later and other people are involved and it's confusing. but the content is good so I keep reading.
-megan
I find it really amusing that this is based on a true story. Autobiographical or wahtever.
But I suggest making some form of...divider? when you switch times and scenes and whatver. It's like...suddenly its 20 minutes later and other people are involved and it's confusing. but the content is good so I keep reading.
-megan
4/3/2007 c5 Megan-TheWriter
Hm...I like the story so far. it's god jah. One thing I noticed though was last chapter you spelt Sean like that and this chapter it's Shawn...So I'll go see what it is further down lol.
-Megan
Hm...I like the story so far. it's god jah. One thing I noticed though was last chapter you spelt Sean like that and this chapter it's Shawn...So I'll go see what it is further down lol.
-Megan
7/12/2006 c15 Mae
Haha! this was a really good story, and I'm so glad I read it! Its was to the point and well written, and I can't believe it's true!
Haha! this was a really good story, and I'm so glad I read it! Its was to the point and well written, and I can't believe it's true!
7/12/2006 c15 myself
just read your story and loved it!
just read your story and loved it!
7/12/2006 c15 Disconnecktie
That ending was perfect! I was sort-of crying because this is one of my favorite stories.
That ending was perfect! I was sort-of crying because this is one of my favorite stories.
7/12/2006 c15 RedBerries
Aw man, does that mean that you and the real life Luke didn't get together in the end? That sucks man. He obviously isn't as smart as the fictional Luke who could see what an amazing person you really are.
You seem to have got a lot more philosophical in the last couple of chapters, bit of a mood change, but it was alright. Really well written all throughout, and really funny, but t be honest, I think the humour did fizzle out a little bit once Amy left.
Looking forward to the sequel!
Aw man, does that mean that you and the real life Luke didn't get together in the end? That sucks man. He obviously isn't as smart as the fictional Luke who could see what an amazing person you really are.
You seem to have got a lot more philosophical in the last couple of chapters, bit of a mood change, but it was alright. Really well written all throughout, and really funny, but t be honest, I think the humour did fizzle out a little bit once Amy left.
Looking forward to the sequel!
7/11/2006 c14 1EmotionalDrain
Oh gawd! that's like such a cliffhanger...that's the most open-ended ending i've ever read! I want to know what really happened, PLEASE! This is going to drive me insane...and I think you should make a sequel. This story (aka your life)is to interesting to leave at that.
1EmotionalDrainOh gawd! that's like such a cliffhanger...that's the most open-ended ending i've ever read! I want to know what really happened, PLEASE! This is going to drive me insane...and I think you should make a sequel. This story (aka your life)is to interesting to leave at that.
7/11/2006 c14 RedBerries
How can you leave it like that? As if...ARRGH...damn you real life! All I wanted was a definitive ending...it's like reading 'Rebecca' (by Daphne du Maurier) all over again! The anguish! The pain! Hold on...an epilogue? WE get to choose? :: faints ::
Okay, I'm back, with a better state of mind. I guess you're the writer, so you're the only one who can really decide how it's going to end. But even if you do make it up, I still wanted to know what actually happened, even if it's just a side note or something. As for a sequel, would it be from someone else's point of view, or just a continuation of this story?
How can you leave it like that? As if...ARRGH...damn you real life! All I wanted was a definitive ending...it's like reading 'Rebecca' (by Daphne du Maurier) all over again! The anguish! The pain! Hold on...an epilogue? WE get to choose? :: faints ::
Okay, I'm back, with a better state of mind. I guess you're the writer, so you're the only one who can really decide how it's going to end. But even if you do make it up, I still wanted to know what actually happened, even if it's just a side note or something. As for a sequel, would it be from someone else's point of view, or just a continuation of this story?