for Mistakes1/4/2009 c4 darkgurl92
that sucks that Zach lost his memory..
but hopefully he gains them all back.and be the normal Zach..
that sucks that Zach lost his memory..
but hopefully he gains them all back.and be the normal Zach..
6/7/2006 c2 
4Eclipsia Soulbird
here we go. a slightly longer chapter. the dialogue is all very convincing also. i really, really like this. i don't know why it hasn't been given more reviews. i like the interactions between Zach and Ella.
4Eclipsia Soulbirdhere we go. a slightly longer chapter. the dialogue is all very convincing also. i really, really like this. i don't know why it hasn't been given more reviews. i like the interactions between Zach and Ella.
6/7/2006 c1 Eclipsia Soulbird
this is great. written like a journal entry. make sure to enable anonymous reviews too... or not, up to you. i loved the opening paragraph; very attention-grabbing. i love that you write so unashamed, lemon-wise (love scenes are called lemons, aren't they? it's been several years but i'm still new to this (and by unashamed i only meant that it's difficult for me to write "lemons")) but this is a great story. it deserves many more reviews. perhaps that chapters could be longer. and the format-but FictionPress has been acting up about formatting so perhaps it would be best not to bother. who knows? it's just friendly advice, and knowing me it's probably the wrong advice (never listen to me if we're ever lost in a car together. i might travel allover the planet but i really have no idea where i am at any time). onto the next chapter!
this is great. written like a journal entry. make sure to enable anonymous reviews too... or not, up to you. i loved the opening paragraph; very attention-grabbing. i love that you write so unashamed, lemon-wise (love scenes are called lemons, aren't they? it's been several years but i'm still new to this (and by unashamed i only meant that it's difficult for me to write "lemons")) but this is a great story. it deserves many more reviews. perhaps that chapters could be longer. and the format-but FictionPress has been acting up about formatting so perhaps it would be best not to bother. who knows? it's just friendly advice, and knowing me it's probably the wrong advice (never listen to me if we're ever lost in a car together. i might travel allover the planet but i really have no idea where i am at any time). onto the next chapter!