
6/3/2008 c1
4Katie-Maude
I really love how you started this and I hope someday you pick it up and continue the story. It seems like it could be really interesting.

I really love how you started this and I hope someday you pick it up and continue the story. It seems like it could be really interesting.
8/26/2006 c1 your harbor
I really like this... the plot's great, thr grammar's amazing, it's all really good! I thought since I liked your other piece of art I would check out another one.
If you could review my one work, I would REALLY appreciate it, especially constructive critism but anything you want to review is fine with me.
Thanks/Bye!
I really like this... the plot's great, thr grammar's amazing, it's all really good! I thought since I liked your other piece of art I would check out another one.
If you could review my one work, I would REALLY appreciate it, especially constructive critism but anything you want to review is fine with me.
Thanks/Bye!
7/8/2006 c1 Reiye
Sounds interesting so far - this has potential.
Sounds interesting so far - this has potential.
6/23/2006 c1
4Koyoru
Love it! Continue!
I kind of lost where I was in "So Damn Smug" and I'm too lazy to re-read it. At least this one, I'll be able to follow a little better.
~Koyoru

Love it! Continue!
I kind of lost where I was in "So Damn Smug" and I'm too lazy to re-read it. At least this one, I'll be able to follow a little better.
~Koyoru
6/4/2006 c1 Kjersti
Well, this certainly seems promising! :)Can't wait to read more. Nice introduction.
Well, this certainly seems promising! :)Can't wait to read more. Nice introduction.
6/2/2006 c1
4madpoet08
hey- this is really good! I hope you're going to continue it, I would really like to see where it goes...anyways, keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
ps- are you still working on So Damn Smug?

hey- this is really good! I hope you're going to continue it, I would really like to see where it goes...anyways, keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
ps- are you still working on So Damn Smug?
6/1/2006 c1 hyperoncandles
really great start :]
really great start :]