6/2/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I enjoyed this. It may not be your best, but I can’t really find anything to complain about. The beginning was stronger than the end, simply because of its clever diction, but none of this is poorly written. Keep writing!
I enjoyed this. It may not be your best, but I can’t really find anything to complain about. The beginning was stronger than the end, simply because of its clever diction, but none of this is poorly written. Keep writing!