
6/6/2006 c1 Wyvernwings
This story looks really good. I can't wait to read more. You have some spelling and grammer mistakes but you just need to slow down a little. The last sentence of the message didn't make any sence but besides that its all pretty good.
This story looks really good. I can't wait to read more. You have some spelling and grammer mistakes but you just need to slow down a little. The last sentence of the message didn't make any sence but besides that its all pretty good.