for Vanilla Lotion2/6/2007 c1 
5Crazy4Catz
First off I have to say I love how you started it out and then how you ended it the same way kind of but different I just like that lol. I also like the way you used lotion, the thing she loved the most to end up being the death of her, that right there freaked me out. Anyway yeah, I really did like this uh not the death part or the way the thing killed her just the way you wrote it. Oh one more thing the way that you put who the thing made her sit on the chair, I just could picture that (not a nice picture) and yeah shivers and chills all the way. Lol keep up the good work by the way.
5Crazy4CatzFirst off I have to say I love how you started it out and then how you ended it the same way kind of but different I just like that lol. I also like the way you used lotion, the thing she loved the most to end up being the death of her, that right there freaked me out. Anyway yeah, I really did like this uh not the death part or the way the thing killed her just the way you wrote it. Oh one more thing the way that you put who the thing made her sit on the chair, I just could picture that (not a nice picture) and yeah shivers and chills all the way. Lol keep up the good work by the way.
6/19/2006 c1 27Apoc Genesis
First of all, i would like to applaud you for your toleration of kutelizzy's abuse.
Second, I would like to say that this is a great piece. I personally loved the description, and it made the subject of the story that much stronger.
But I get the feeling that the lotion stands for something else...im thinking either love or drugs I can't really say, but sometimes they both make hideous "things" appear, so I can't say.
Keep writing! And dont let that bitch get you down
27Apoc GenesisFirst of all, i would like to applaud you for your toleration of kutelizzy's abuse.
Second, I would like to say that this is a great piece. I personally loved the description, and it made the subject of the story that much stronger.
But I get the feeling that the lotion stands for something else...im thinking either love or drugs I can't really say, but sometimes they both make hideous "things" appear, so I can't say.
Keep writing! And dont let that bitch get you down
6/8/2006 c1 5Ashley Nicole Teel
I like it. Very much.
Especially the "Thing." You don't know exctly if it's human or not.
:)
5Ashley Nicole TeelI like it. Very much.
Especially the "Thing." You don't know exctly if it's human or not.
:)