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7/27/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
oh wow! This was really good! I loved this poem. That first stanza was by far though, my favorite lines. It seems like you could've made this just a bit longer...I wanted to read more! :D But this was still really good...And the line Hearts bruised, was really neat as well. *smiles* Great job with this! I really loved it!

(oh! read your profile..I LOVE Agatha Christie..she's the best author! AH! haha..thought i'd share that with you?)

Anyways :D *keep writing!*

~Britney :)
7/19/2006 c1 7Arcularis
This is very true.

One of the plainer poems I have read, but still full of meaning. Everyone has their own style.
6/20/2006 c1 S.J.Maas
Hi,Okay, so this isn't a review of your poem (which was really lovely...in a sad and depressing way), but you have no e-mail listed on your info, so I can't contact you. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you for catching all of my typos in my story, "Queen of Glass," and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind editing/beta-ing for me (lol even though I have a few betas already...clearly it isn't enough). If not, then it would be great if you could e-mail them to me instead of reviewing them, since I tend to lose track of my reviews...Anyway, shoot me an e-mail and let me know what you think!Thanks again!SJ Maas

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