for Drawing Blood6/3/2006 c1 betweenthelines
Odd, but very interesting. It woul be coo if you expanded it and had her show "symptoms" and then end up doing 'that' to the guy she liked. I know I'd read it!
Odd, but very interesting. It woul be coo if you expanded it and had her show "symptoms" and then end up doing 'that' to the guy she liked. I know I'd read it!
6/3/2006 c1 
1L.F. DiBello
Hey-I'm new to the site but hopefully that won't make you think any less of my review.
So-love the story! You have a good way of writing naturally so tht it's easy to follow and interesting. Also, I like the part at the end about how the mother feels, etc...
Anyway-this is great! Keep up the good work
1L.F. DiBelloHey-I'm new to the site but hopefully that won't make you think any less of my review.
So-love the story! You have a good way of writing naturally so tht it's easy to follow and interesting. Also, I like the part at the end about how the mother feels, etc...
Anyway-this is great! Keep up the good work