for Saving Hope For Another Day6/3/2006 c1 
34mylittlechangingtruths
i read this with clenched knuckle; you eloquently wrote the pain i feel, at times. i wish the games could stop, and that there'd be a place that this were truly possible. and not just death..
34mylittlechangingtruthsi read this with clenched knuckle; you eloquently wrote the pain i feel, at times. i wish the games could stop, and that there'd be a place that this were truly possible. and not just death..
6/3/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I really enjoyed reading this. The rhyming was nice and I think it really added to the poem. I also think you did an excellent job of expressing your emotions in this piece. There is a feeling of desperation that lingers in the words of this poem. All in all, this is a well written piece. Keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed reading this. The rhyming was nice and I think it really added to the poem. I also think you did an excellent job of expressing your emotions in this piece. There is a feeling of desperation that lingers in the words of this poem. All in all, this is a well written piece. Keep up the good work!