for A THUG'S DIARY6/27/2006 c1 
18ladyscribe
I like it very much, it's very raw, but I have one question...is this your life or based on your life? Hit me back on that.
18ladyscribeI like it very much, it's very raw, but I have one question...is this your life or based on your life? Hit me back on that.
6/3/2006 c1 H. S
I'm not really into this genre, but this was pretty interesting and a concept I haven't seen before. I do think, however, that the poor capitalization makes this story difficult to read. The thug's grammar makes it very life-like, for lack of a better word. Work on the capitalization, but keep it up.
I'm not really into this genre, but this was pretty interesting and a concept I haven't seen before. I do think, however, that the poor capitalization makes this story difficult to read. The thug's grammar makes it very life-like, for lack of a better word. Work on the capitalization, but keep it up.
6/3/2006 c1 Sex Pistols
Why is every word in a sentence capitalized? Everytime you make yourself talk you say 'So I was like,' sounds kind of repetitive. I guess if I was into this stuff I'd like it...maybe. At least you have a story line going.
Why is every word in a sentence capitalized? Everytime you make yourself talk you say 'So I was like,' sounds kind of repetitive. I guess if I was into this stuff I'd like it...maybe. At least you have a story line going.